the story so far...
There(ed: capitalized t) once was a group of very sober lrishmen who hated themselves and everyone else! Then one day, they decided to go to the tolilet, but suddenly they saw HER.(ed: punctuation) The big, hairy(ed: capitalized t) chest of HERS(ed: removed "..") and her bra(ed: removed "...") which was very(ed: removed "...") fat and never was washed before.(ed: removed "..") The(ed: capitalized t) days passed,(ed: added the coma) wrinkles were appearing n' i'm lost.(ed: removed smiley and added period) Lisais(ed: caps on the l) was panicking and Melissa(ed: caps on the m) too! And(ed: caps on the a) the Irishmen(ed: removed "..." and caps on i)
every week i'm gonna do what i've juz done